What's interesting about these extracts is that they break the rule
which says: never put anything on paper that the camera cant film.
You can but it's a matter of judgement. Too much "colour"
and your script can start to read like a novel. Too little and the
reader might miss the subtleties you intended.
Your aim is display the potential of
your script as it would translate to the screen. Here are a few
basic tips to help lift your writing off the page:
The dynamic pace
of a scene can be given a textual emphasis by splitting up chunks
of action/description to suggest a style of editing. For example:
short sentences on separate lines convey a sense of urgency
with corresponding sharp cuts between shots.
Close Ups (the moment
when you want one image to fill the screen) can sometimes be simply
conveyed through the use of CAPITALS which "zoom" the eye of a reader
like a camera lens. This effect should not be over-used though.
It is often effective to begin a new scene or
cut-away with an action or event
taking place. This draws the reader straight into the scene and
helps maintain the momentum of your narrative. Directors will often
add this in themselves if it's not in the script.
You can exploit visual or sound links
both within scenes and between them. Although this can be a clichéd
device at times ( i.e. a cut from a coal fire at the end of one
scene to a glowing cigarette at the start of the next) cleverly
used it strengthens the sense of a narrative line.
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