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ANDREW DUNCAN
Siren Furnaces Blow Infirm Metals: debuts
of the nineties
Cultural managers lose their looks. One
advances into the 1990s with a cultural tool-kit formed in the 1970s: I
don't have the vocabulary to describe what has changed on the scene with
the arrival of so many new poets, unreviewed and uncollected. Yet, there
they are, and it's me who's losing definition and wisping away. However
Introduced to the Soles, by Nic Laight, Nick Macias, and Niall Quinn was
undoubtedly the most dazzling debut of the decade. Personally, my fear is
of missing things, so my wish is to get everything right first time, which
precludes writing about first books. My whole critical technique is based
on the career review: on recording characteristics made firm by multiple
recurrence. But reactions to a first book are a shimmer-chimaera, an aura
flickering over the visual field which may turn out to mean that you are
falling in love or that you are about to have a migraine. I like
situations where I can't talk sensibly. Take Safety Catch, by Helen
Macdonald, for example. I am quite unable to describe these poems. There
are telltale traces from other discourses, such as the linnet in 'Tuist'
who comes from an experiment on the line between inherited and learnt
behaviour where a hatchling acquires the song of another species when
played it; the accessibility of such moments should not mislead us into
thinking they are central. A passage in 'Parallax' discusses the influence
of Newton's Optics on how we think, thus moving the latter into the realm
of temporal change, as a set of linked cognitive behaviours which we
acquire uncritically as children (but can shift consciously as adults),
and the "ides recues ou ides en l'air, lieux communs, codes de
convenance et de morale, conformismes ou interdits, expressions admises,
imposes ou exclues" which for Philippe Aris, in an essay on concepts,
characterise and divide periods; perhaps linked to a passage in 'Tuist'
which I believe to be about the 1930s and why they are mysterious; Helen
seems to regard period-mentalities as a puzzle, perhaps because of a
dissociated and detached nature which finds the unconscious rules of the
period she lives in difficult to follow. "the beautiful insulatory/
qualities of the English Channel" likewise seems to problematise
Englishness, seen as a package on offer rather than as "second nature". We
could even link this to the linnet in the experiment: we are thrown at
birth into a family which equips us with a behaviour set whose
arbitrariness we can see but not quite reach. Perhaps this fleet-footed
recession explains why the Macdonald poem, full of fascinating objects, is
uninvolving, free of silent commands to feel and to identify? But this
only covers a few isolated passages within a complex which I find quite
elusive. Even these sketches are probably projective on my part, since
even if Helen is interested in innate behaviour controls she is unlikely
to have the same angle on them as I do. Its fondness for subtle,
evanescent, and unusual sensations is not the key to this graceful poetry,
a fluent and alien sight for which no name or response set yet
exists. If we look at Dan Lane's poem on p.60 of Angel Exhaust Fifteen,
he says 'soft metallic impression', while at p.133 Kevin Nolan refers to
'clamour of soft metals' (in 'Baion with soft metals to come', quoted from
his wonderfulpamphlet Alar), while at p.27 of AE Nine Helen Macdonald
refers to "soft/ and perfect metals" ('Tuist', now reprinted with two new
sections in Safety Catch). Clearly we have entered a new dispensation in
which hard metals are pas chic. I find this phrase quite indefinable, and
any sense I do find in it is as a sweet acid blur, something which is like
a paradox but yet more ambiguous. It is irresoluble and yet evokes subtle
substances, the relaxation of set patterns, delicacy and the removal of
strain, the blurring of categories and the lifting of mere functionality.
I associate it with oripeau et clinquaille (one of Prynne's books
in French, and two words advertising pliant and unreliable metals), and
with 'A Note on Metal', but mainly with a new era and my inability to
comment on it. There is a faction which freezes out everything which
has happened since 1977. This is a mixture of self-satisfaction,
historical pessimism, and of projection onto the "counter culture" so
shiny that anything else seems tenuous and unglamorous by contrast. This
school consumed, during the 1990s, only books by those who were "on scene"
during the 1970s. (Of course, it's questionable that the radicals of '68
now believe in the counter-culture, which may have been put to sleep in
1975.) This is the kind of purity, and fear of outside elements, which
made the political movement of the 1970s unsuccessful. This point of view
is past its sell-by date. The publication of Foil (edited by Nicholas
Johnson, 394 pp., 33 poets), as an "exhibition anthology" of the new
generation, gives us an excuse to argue about the recent past. A few
answers to questions about this generation: the London-Cambridge split is
meaningless; no-one believes in the counter-culture and there is very
little interest in politics; self-expression and the recall of deep
emotional experience are out of fashion; virtuality is the chic ideal;
there is no large-scale poetry being written. A lot is happening in the
south-west. The overall cultural field has shifted, experience is a poor
guide. Elementarily, it's easier to sell poets who have been doing it
for twenty years and have an acquired audience than new ones; the
competition between someone aged 25 and one aged 50 always favours the
latter. It is irritating for young poets that the poets of the 1960s are
still around, getting in the way of decisive seizure of montage, Marxism,
pop, performance, conceptualism, confessionalism, Jungianism, and so many
other things which could be the vehicles of a splendid reputation. It
seems to be very difficult to get a book out unless you're a JH Prynne
covers band (or else in the mainstream). It's strange how people of
generous political views can start sounding like workhouse managers when
they discuss why it's morally better that young poet X, who can't get
their book out, should shut up and stop complaining. The people who make
opinion are the same ones who want the few unorthodox publishers to
concentrate on getting their books out. On the other side, there is a kind
of cultural stalking, where someone becomes a fan of an elder figure,
writes like them, pours praise on them, offers to publish them. People
without cultural assets must pursue strategies in order to gain them;
performance, with its timeless needs for ballyhoo and brass, has produced
the most corrupt simulation and touting of assets. To be recognised as
legitimate, one has to be recognisable; something really new isn't
accepted as new because it is strange and perplexing. Mostly, closer
acquaintance exposes what seemed interesting as flashy and short of
breath, which I am afraid accounts for some of the other debuts of the
decade. Reviews of the poetry of the seventies placed it all, at the
time, in a stylistic map, loosely of American poetry of the 1950s, which
gave the reviewers confidence (they'd read the script), but which
contained predictions about the future which didn't come true, and which
missed everything new about that poetry. Confidence about classifying may
be conservatism at the conceptual level. The negative image of the
reader assimilating (and so de-estranging) the poetic line is the poet
discerning what his or her true direction is, and focussing a great
deal. I have the habit of deleting what is uncertain, but my problems
in saying anything about such poets as Macdonald and Robert Smith are
worth setting out, because my state of haze, oscillation, and conjecture
is indicative. The new landscape awaits its Greil Marcus. Meanwhile, it
might be a good thing if the British Poetry Revival finally kicks the
bucket, breaks up, and scavenges itself back to life as multiple
autonomous units. The seventies are over.
I suppose the act of
consumption to be central to us, and so I offer a list of indispensable
books. These are objects, but in fact we cannot discuss ideas unless the
evidence is, to some extent, shared. My list runs: Kevin Nolan, Alar;
However Introduced to the Soles, by Nic Laight, Niall Quinn, and Nick
Macias; Helen Macdonald, Safety Catch; Adrian Clarke, Spectral Investment;
Peter Manson, Birth Windows; Simon Smith, 15 Exits; Karlien van den
Beukel, Pitch Lake; Robert Smith, Sonnets; Paul Holman, The Memory of the
Drift; DS Marriott, Clouds & Forges; David Kinloch, Paris-Forfar; Dan
Lane, Stuff Culture; Michael Ayres, Poems 1987-92; Rob MacKenzie, Off
Ardglas; Tim Atkins, To Repel Ghosts; David Greenslade, Each Broken
Object; Vittoria Vaughan, The Mummery Preserver; Scott Thurston,
Statewalk; Caroline Bergvall, Glimpses of a Room in Movement; Grace Lake,
Bernache Nonnette; David Barnett, All the Year Round. We are following
Foil's rule of "having emerged since 1986". I appreciate relativising
arguments which state that these are not the "best" new poets but only the
best within a certain segment of the spectrum, locating which would also
locate me, as a partial observer -a hot eye desensitized by its own
emissions. I assume that you agree with me-after all, you are an
intelligent person.
Foil itself is a book one inevitably has to
read. No doubt the limits of the anthology are situated at its limits.
Certainly I would like to see a follow-up volume. I was pretty glad to see
this one. The Informationists, the Jungians, and the group influenced by A
Various Art (i.e. Gairfish, Memes, and fragmente, in magazines) are
absent. If you read all of Foil, you may die. Most of it is rather bad.
Thrill to the instantly forgettable New Age kitsch of X, the sloppy,
hysterical, Burgerking-Gothic Catling pastiche of Y, the Carry on Lacan
sex yibble of W. Bring a thermos of tea and a transistor radio. Of the
poets omitted from Foil, we could mention: David Kinloch, Richard Price,
Ian Duhig, Patrick Gasperini, Andy Brown, Tim Allen, Robert Smith, Simon
Smith, Andrew Lawson, David Greenslade, Vittoria Vaughan, Elizabeth
Bletsoe, Norman Jope, Paul Holman, Scott Thurston, Fiona Templeton, Dan
Lane, David Bircumshaw, Michael Ayres, Steve Harris, David Barnett, DS
Marriott, John Goodby, Chris Bendon, David Rushmer. How everyone hates my
lists! But the polygon of qualities is too hard to draw. The reader may
well ask what the difference is between Foil and the anthology The New
Poetry (edited by Hulse, Kennedy, and Morley, 1993), which covers the same
ground but has no overlaps with Foil. Neither one overlaps with the Stride
anthology of younger poets, The Stumbling Dance (ed. Rupert Loydell,
1994). Two volumes of "The New Poetries" from Carcanet didn't reveal
anything you would want to look at twice. The non-overlaps suggest that
the dots haven't resolved into a picture. The five books mentioned may
represent four vertices of a new literary space. Does this show the
abolition of the difference between "underground" and "mainstream'? no,
but the oppositions have changed configuration. If we take TNP and Foil as
the significant sites, the difference between them has to do with surface
strangeness; the poetry in Foil is at first glance puzzling, unsignposted,
hard to relate to a self which might be speaking, or to a situation. The
poetry in TNP is welcoming, has a way in, seems comfortable, even if it
sidesteps into originality thereafter. Nick Johnson, although missing some
forms of intelligence which other people have got, has certainly scored
some successes as a poet. The gap between the two streams needs to be
questioned. My attention was drawn to David Pople and Maggie Hannan as
unconventional poets within the mainstream's embrace. Their poetry isn't
really very good. But it might develop into something. The gatekeepers
aren't as dull as they were; but they do not tolerate the artistically
realised originality of a K. van den Beukel or a Robert Smith, and so the
concept "alternative" will retain its usefulness. Alliance is of little
worth unless it is sharply bounded; it is not a binding principle, as
alliance at point A implies hostility at point B; alliance means slowing
down, the fatigue of identification. There is no alternative "scene".
Splits are the landscape. Shifts in the site and number of the divisions
in the poetic field may be the changes to mark over the last 20 years.
They may have changed even though no real horizontal division, and
rebellion, is visible within the rather friendly flow of the "experimental
scene". The problem of placing the new may be connected to the
disappearance of magazines in "my" market segment, which may disappear
itself: the erasure of boundaries, the diffusion of its special qualities
which could either be expansion or simply dispersal. There was
formerly a polarity like this:
poetry essay highly subjective
reflexive & objective
which has vanished as poetry bought into
reflexivity. The new polarity is:
poetry essay reflexive
reflexive realisation of arbitrary rules about something and limited to
what is true
To this we have to add a spectrum split within poetry,
roughly:
culturally "high" culturally "low" or
old-fashioned reflexive highly subjective realisation of arbitrary
rules expressive, reveals character self-referential refers to the
self
This would, tentatively, explain the omissions from Foil. The
atmosphere of the sixties redefined the 50s poets as drab and too
concerned by morality. At this moment, we can see that the new set has
gone further down this axis, and that it redefines the poets of the 60s
and 70s as, relatively, moralistic and concerned with character and duties
towards others. They had ideas which were about the world; they used the
poet's character as a guarantee of the truth of the poems, which was part
of their claim to interest. The poetry which originated in the 60s was
hedonistic and relaxed: but the new poetry is tense, striving,
status-oriented. There seems to be less leisure for anything except the
agreed terms of competition. Personal politics appear here only in the
form of winning status competitions. The "chic charged" procedures carry a
whiff of (elite) social contacts, of 'networks', but also of a new version
of the good place: the exciting scene where the charging occurred. I don't
know where but it takes me there. I do agree that ideas possess prestige,
among other qualities. But using ideas except to explain something is
somehow ludicrous. The need for poetry of ideas to go to the edge of what
the writer understands (to find consciousness) has often meant confusion
and hysteria being offered as verbal art. The (brain) pan has boiled over,
and that strange sound is the panful burning up on the stove. The
underlying teleology is to cultivate one's ability to concentrate on an
abstract idea, which is also the teleology of education. All that
perplexes is not complex. Taught performance starts out with the idea that
presenting a character whom the audience can recognise and identify with
is old hat and un-chic. The figure who speaks has to be denatured. This
nullity makes audience inattention likely, so the performer has to project
intense concentration and sense of purpose. Non-psychological procedures
are applied inexorably. This has produced a certain detachment from the
reader's organic waves of attention; a new and uncollected form of
boredom. Simply going on for a long time is not cultivated, it reeks
instead of dullness and blankness, and heavy going. The pedagogy of the
imaginary makes possible a pedantry of the unreal. The opposition
between "art about reality" and "virtual art' can be bypassed if we look
at the depth and relatedness of the information encoded in the rules of
the work. I have to remind the new poets that new forms of art imply new
ways of failing. Even complexity is not interesting unless it has
transparency. We can take any work of art as the realisation of a set of
rules taking the form of a game. The new term implexity (cf. implicit,
complexity, complicit) describes the power of simple rules to generate
long series of complex and different game-situations. This quality is
found, so to speak, four or five layers deep in the unfolding of the
rules, and this is why artistic quality is so shakily related to the
"assets" which book jackets and similar propaganda so brazenly bray out.
Not all rule-sets have high implexity. Critical classing must surely care
for this quality and not for the surface aspects of style. The modern
poet is in effect building a musical instrument in order to find out what
it sounds like; each poem demonstrates some of the properties of the
formal space thus opened, without flooding it all to the edges. So much
follows from the curve in a brass tube. One can produce shapes either by
copying them from the world, or by implementing formulae which describe
surfaces, corners, curves, etc., and which we could generate ad lib or
accidentally. Think of the interiors of a thousand buildings, generated by
construction procedures rather than by reproduction of a pre-existing
reality. The new poem is desirable above all else. The objects on sale
in the shops at the Design Museum or the Craft Centre do have that
quality: a kick for the eye. Its structure aims to maximise, in quantity
and fascination, information available at any point, in order to throw the
reader back into early states of curiosity and playfulness. It is like a
shop full of wonderful textiles - 268 chenilles. It thinks like a
recording engineer, more concerned by textural depth than by the emotional
logic of the song. It is more important to suggest this ripple of
available textures than to realise them.
My command of Welsh is
eccentric and sketchy. I studied mediaeval Welsh as part of a rather odd
mediaeval degree, and when I went to a Modern Welsh evening class, the
first time I was allowed to translate some sentences the teacher looked
dumbfounded for a bit and said "I've never heard anyone say that.' This
should be borne in mind as I discuss Yr Wyddor (1998), by David
Greenslade, which may possibly be the first avant-garde book written in
Welsh. The title means 'the alphabet', but is very close to a word
egwyddor, meaning 'element' or 'principle' (for the link, cf. Greek
stoikheion). A visual artist had done an exhibition of burnt letters on
cloth (as a symbol of oppressed culture and lost language) which had been
presented as a kind of collective nationalist ritual, and the texts were
produced to illustrate it. None of this sounds like uncertainty, or
criticism, or anything we know as "avant garde". We should mention Hunllef
Arthur here, since a quote on the cover of Yr Wyddor (by Simon Brooks)
names Bobi Jones, along with Greenslade, as the only two unconditional
modernists (modernydd digymodredd) in Welsh. This is a 1986 work about
King Arthur, dreaming (hunllef is actually nightmare) the whole course of
Welsh history. It is 21,000 lines long, and has also been described as
post-modern. It is surely, Arthurian Christian poetry of the 1950s, at
unchecked length. There is a physical world to whose surface we cling,
and many of the differences in human societies depend on their objects,
through which we act on the world: the hand instructs the brain, fills in
the data on its sensory sheets. Things with hard edges hold the mystery of
sense. The object is a limited stimulus field, a ruling containing finite
rules, focussing the brain enough to allow a breakthrough into truth and
mystery. Greenslade's object poems, in Each Broken Object, come directly
out of the experience of learning Welsh, and follow his poems in Welsh,
The Alphabet, where the code emerges, impossibly, free and as an object;
he works in that zone between two verbal codes where the edges become
visible, and the problems of the real nature of the outside world, and of
categorisation, become urgent. To understand the relations between hand,
eye, and symbolic knowledge is almost to grasp what human identity is.
Greenslade is also paying tribute to the gift exchange genre of Gaelic and
Welsh poetry, where the bard's ornately precise description of precisely
ornate objects-of desire, exchange, display, and alliance-gives the poems
their famous concreteness. These sources also contain the beauty and
fantasy in which these new object poems are so rich. Menna Elfyn was
recently published in a parallel-text version by Bloodaxe (Eucalyptus).
The Welsh side of the page seems to me lively, dancing, playing with
language, altogether charming; in translation, it loses these qualities;
she appears merely as a cheerful and kind-hearted housewife. Perhaps a
more frivolous translator could do better. There is a fantasy element
in the public perception of Gaelic; an effacing sublimity. Anyway, the
Lallans-speaking community is roughly 30 times as large as the Gaelic
community. There is an anti-artistic sentimentality now projected onto
third-rate Gaelic poets; although, mind you, there is a similar
sentimentality projected by and onto pub-level Lallans poets. Tom Leonard
on your shortbread tin, maybe. The Mummery Preserver (1996; 61pp.) is
by Vittoria Vaughan (1970-), who began publishing poems around 1992, is
steeped in Jungian ideas which may have come from anywhere in the
landscape: the New Age culture has made these units of design universally
available. They represent, of course, a popular stratum of taste,
unacceptable to the poet to the extent that they have accepted the
university culture, sceptical and legitimate. The poems seem to be
adventures of the body image; unstably projected onto manifold forms of
the natural world, in an exchange of parts. This is perhaps a phase which
precedes abstract thought, and abstract thought may in fact be a
specialisation of this faculty. My caution about this tumult of
expressivity, captivating as it undoubtedly is, has to do with the
isolation of the central figure: the poems are the product of fantasy and
introspection, not of a dialogic principle. The fascination with trees
imports the fact, mythic as well as biological, that trees don't have a
social life. This situation is brought out in the first poem in the book,
the eponymous one; where we find out that a mummery preserver is a kind of
mummy (picked up in the picture of a mummy on the jacket). Mummery, an old
English word, is dressing up, for example among mummers (old word for
actors), or mummed up (snugly, against the winter). This bizarre crossover
is on a good footing; mummies are mummed in rather tight windings ('long
linen swathes', the poet says), and these preserve them against the
virtual "cold" of death. The mummy, wound in ambiguities like a good dream
image, is also a dustless home, a woman's body growing older (looking like
your mummy, in the other sense), the perfect body which is preserved in
some internal imagery, and the other perfect body which make-up and
adornment realise. The linen bands have something important to do with the
poet's mother and grandmother. The daughter is perhaps a precious
internalised image (certainly internalised, certainly "the image of you")
of the mother. The mummery is a disguise, an ornamental face and bearing
inside which the real self sits. Pulling at this imagery tangles me in
dozens of yards of linen all covered in hieroglyphs. It has a certain
affinity to Tsvetayeva's "Poloterskaya", which must be the greatest poem
ever written about housework; (the name is the form used for names of
dances, like the polonaise, and so means "Floor Polisher's Dance", and
indeed there is a lot about floor polishing being a gliding motion like
dancing); it contains the words for "grandmother" and "mummer", although
the latter only in disguised form (mummers, in the disorderly days around
Christmas, are ryazhonnye, and the poem has only the compound form
naryadit'sya, which means to dress up in finery, from Lamanova's, possibly
a couturier in pre-war Saint Petersburg). The poem is full of the kind of
dream doubling and coupling of words which makes mummy into mummery:
Kolotery-molotery,/Polotyery-polodyeri,/Kumashniy stan,/Bakhromchatiy
shtan. This quatrain is pure dream, but we could say something
like: Ripple-skimmers-moth-skinners/ Flashwipers-floorwhippers/ Red
cotton flock/ frilled trousers. I am not quite sure about the frills,
but perhaps we could say Red cotton-rag strips / Gleam stripes-flounced
bottom. The tree poems go on for about 400 lines; for example
to
start at the tip, the cypress is the final tree of life, the
pre-elysium maze circular an unending corpses can't escape, its dark
forest of velvet-lined incubation chambers the wheal without a
common thread.
the cypress is an evergreen robot factory, its
resurrection wires clung to by the dead as if they were bole of last
breath
holding procreation, as if pinnacles of a golden,
visionary gate.
The hypothesis we enter, entering the poem, is an
anatomy; and is a temporary self. (Wheal, a Cornish word, is a
mine-shaft.) The use of an external symbol gives a voice to parts of the
self which are usually dumb; the temporary occupation of this astonishing
verbal toy can say something about more permanent seizures, and the pure
plasticity which lies behind all the captured objects. The shape of an
anatomy, imaginatively wrapped round as a mummery, is not serial like a
poem, and it is the sequencing of sense which causes problems; these poems
would rather be overall than have a line structure. The recitation of
analogies and attributes can resemble the more baffling passages of
Aboriginal myth, or of the Old Testament, where the mass of esoteric
theological-taxonomic detail defies us. The poet, who thanks Norman
(undoubtedly Norman Jope) at the front of the book, is in some kind of a
dioscuran pair, dictated by birth and mythological partiality, with
Elisabeth Bletsoe; the kind that continues throughout life. Bletsoe wrote
a series about angels, Vaughan one about trees; both have gone in for
nature study in a hard and intense way; Bletsoe writes about organisms on
the beach at Whitby, Vaughan about similar on the beach at Brighton.
One of Helen Macdonald's poems in Foil is called 'Morphometrics',
which refers to the grid projections used by the Scottish theoretical
biologist D'Arcy Wentworth Thompson (in chapter 9 of On Growth and Form,
1917) to demonstrate that all the bones of a certain fish species could be
subjected to the same transform to be turned successfully into the anatomy
of a different fish species. The graphics he used to demonstrate this give
you a "wow" feeling, in fact they are one of the upscale "wow" feelings.
Of course, the transform is commutative: you can turn species B into A as
well as A into B. He was translating anatomy into topology, giving access
to the power of matrices. Part of the reason why he was 50 years ahead of
his time is the abiding mathematical under-qualification of biologists;
sternly dedicated to observation, recording, and memorising, they were
averse to the freedom from reality which makes mathematics (and of course
our mathematically-based economic system) so powerful. Grasping the
pattern which relates a group of species must be deeper knowledge than
factual memory of the visible features of those species: more virtual,
more manipulable. You might retort, what kind of knowledge is knowledge of
species that don't exist? This is closely related to virtuality in poetry,
and constructed poems that describe experiences that don't exist. One of
Thompson's remarks was that symmetry in animal bodies may be related to
the frequency in physics of symmetries as stable states of dynamic
systems, an observation he took from the Austrian physicist Ernst Mach.
Mach wrote about mental models and the fictions by which we deal with
unknowable reality; he declared both the atom and the self to be fictions
(in The analysis of sensation). das unrettbare ich, the unsaveable self,
was his phrase, a founding idea in Austrian modernism. We might well ask,
who is trying to save it? what reads poetry? what writes poetry? Mach's
ideas led on, not only to logical positivism (the investigation of mental
models as revealed in language), but also to Deleuze and Guattari and
their radically atomised and multiple theory of the self, l'inconscient
machinique. The symmetry proposition tells us that parts of anatomy are
not design but results of the laws of physics; the study of how the
fertilised cell, with small intelligence, builds an organism which does
have intelligence, tells us something about the growth of consciousness.
That is, it may be made up of (many) small-scale sealed automatisms,
completing processes and so seeming "purposeful", prior to a central self
characterised by intention and power. Both the regulation of the growth of
the embryo and the nature of consciousness are outside the knowledge we
actually possess. Thompson's work is quite close to complexity theory, a
part of science which hasn't yet arrived. (Stewart Kaufmann even proposed
replacing Darwinism with Thompsonian effects. We cautiously propose that,
whatever replaces Kaufmann, will be fitter than Kaufmann.) Mach's
scattered and dissolved self is somehow related to ornament, maybe even to
the luxuriance of Viennese baroque. Could we relate this to neural
Darwinism? She does mention memetics. Doesn't the quality of a picture
have to do with its distribution in space, the relative autonomy of its
parts? The visual pattern is analogous to the pattern of attention in the
brain perceiving it. The balance between dominant and subdued lines in a
design, indeed the need for a dominant shape at all, point to the
dominance of one "agent" in the brain, and its relationship with other,
minor, agents. The relationship of a wrought visual surface to the
viewer's ideal of the balance between different psychological agents is a
source of anxiety. "Ornament is crime" is related to "the unrescuable
self", perhaps a denial of it. Morphometrics may not be of primary
importance to the poem. The poems do not describe "thinking about birds to
the exclusion of all else" but a variety of conscious processes in which
thinking about birds is common. Actually, bird evolution is only one of
the topics which flashes up. Experience is multiplanar; the shifting
between quite different planes of experience may be essential to the
design of the poems. Perhaps the simultaneity of thoughts about bird
anatomy, of the sensation of being in a boat on a lake, and thoughts about
another person, is probative of experience which is real and satisfying. A
series, then, of singular aggregates of components in several planes which
barely resemble each other, which change from second to second, and which
are quite different from their parts. This might be a description of the
self. The incommensurability of the separate parts of experience may be
the heart of the matter. Since they are not attached, the aggregate
changes all the time. An ich which is real but which serially dissolves.
In traditional poetry, the linking of a sentiment to an object, known by
touch and handling, by means of metaphor, was essential: the poem existed
in two planes at once; it is this principle which we are seeing extended.
Judging by some previous Cambridge poetry, unrelatedness is integrity: a
quality bespeaking real experience as opposed to fantasy. In this local
framework, the sublime is located in uncertainty, and in the projection of
a third dimension out of lines on a flat surface. These poems could be
called lyric or documentary, but really both of those mistake what it is.
I could mention, as figures nearly in sight, whose work I have
barely seen, Rob Holloway, Dell Olsen, Wayne Clements, or Val
Pancucci. ** Bibliography Wunberg, ed., Die Wiener
Moderne; Fearful Symmetry (Stewart and Golubitski); D'Arcy Thompson, On
Growth and Form; Safety Catch published as part of Etruscan Reader
I The strange design of this piece is partly due to an essay,
'Speculations on a Generation Born in the Sixties', which appeared in
Angel Exhaust 15, and whose remarks I have tried not to repeat. Angel
Exhaust also published reviews of Clarke, Ayres, Duhig, Nolan, Rushmer,
and Lake, at various times.
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