Winning stories go to literary
agent
Congratulations to the 3 overall
winners of the Writers' & Artists'
Yearbook 2007 novel writing
competition!
A train journey fraught with memories, a
copywriter about to be sacked, and a father's
mysterious death set the scenes for the three
winning entries in the Writers' &
Artists' Yearbook 2007 novel writing
competition.
The winners (in no particular order) are:
Jude Cook - Byron Easy
This is the story of Byron Easy - poet and
failed womaniser; an anti-Byron, in effect, whom
we meet on the final Christmas Eve of the last
century. As his British Rail train journeys from
London to Leeds, he reviews his childhood,
glitzy marriage and metropolitan friendships; a
process which allows him to ponder betrayal,
love and the nature of memory. More importantly,
we discover the series of calamities that led
him to his tartan train seat… Click here to read the full
synopsis
Click here to read an extract
from Byron Easy
Click here to find out more
about Jude Cook
TLC say
A literary, first-person
narrative, was unexpected and original. Its
subject, a would-be poet and debaucher', sounds
potentially pretentious. However, the ingenious
way in which the writer makes the pompously
philosophical character funny despite himself,
and the sheer quality of the prose, excited us
all hugely and reminded us of some classic
first-person narratives in literature such as is
found in Nabakov's' Lolita'.
Aileen Izett - Eveline
Eveline is a young, beautiful, black woman
who is found lying abandoned at the gates of a
chateau. She doesn't speak. She's clutching a
silver bullet. The narrator takes the girl in
and calls her Eveline after a character in one
of her late father's novels. She is sure that
the girl is searching for someone or
something… Click here to read the full
synopsis
Click here to read an extract
from Eveline
Click here to find out more
about Aileen Izett
TLC say
A totally different kind of
narrative: a family drama, which reminded us of
Dodie Smith's 'I Capture the Castle'. The prose
is simple, winning, gentle, literary - and yet
deals with a theme which is from the outset
violent. We are intrigued by the bold opening
line, and want to read on: 'My brother killed
our father. 'A tragic accident the papers said
...'
Andy Jones - Endline
Mike Johnston is having one hell of a
summer.
He's been at war with his neighbour, at odds
with his friends, and was very nearly killed by
a terrorist bomb. He's lost his income, his
girlfriend, and his handle on the situation… Click here to read the full
synopsis
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from Endline
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about Andy Jones
TLC say
Powerfully different again
and represents by far the most contemporaneous
voice amongst the winners. This reminded us a
little of the work of Nick Taussig, whose novels
have made their way in to the Waterstones 3 for
2, via TLC and a small press called Revolver. We
see a good deal of 'lad's lit' coming in, and
much of it feels derivative and not sufficiently
sharp and original to make an impact. 'Endline'
however, has particular wit, punch and zest -
and we felt it stood out from the crowd.
TLC would like also to commend a close runner
up, 'Learning to Swim' by Kate McEwan,
whose first person narrative set in South Africa
shows real literary promise. Her TLC reader was
passionate about it.
The winners were selected from the shortlist
of 100 (see below) - all of whom received a
prize of a critique of their manuscript from The
Literary Consultancy, worth £150 each.
Becky Swift, Director of TLC says
‘TLC has very much enjoyed working with
the Writers & Artists Yearbook on
their 100th Birthday Anniversary edition and was
delighted to be asked to provide short reports
for the one hundred top entries. Congratulations
to the 'century' that were selected, and good
luck to those who weren't. Deciding to 'become'
a writer is to decide to undertake a long and
often painfully difficult journey. Perseverance
is not for the faint-hearted. All this said,
writing can of course brings great pleasure
also.’ .
The three winning entries will now be passed
on to a top literary agent so fingers crossed
our story doesn't end here!
Secrets of Success - some useful tips from
our 3 winners:
'Join a writers group! It keeps you focussed
and gives you a weekly deadline - and the
feedback from fellow writers is absolutely
invaluable.' Aileen Izett
'Use correct formatting from the get go.
Changing it retrospectively is a bugger. Don't
shy away from difficult scenes; they're full of
hidden treasure. Solicit criticism from honest,
intelligent, supremely patient people. (About
four is perfect). Milk the hell out of the first
draft, and trim the fat in subsequent passes.
Oh, and watch out for clichés and mixed
metaphors.
But more than any of this; don't give up.'
Andy Jones
'My only advice to aspiring writers is to
read everything - fiction, poetry, plays,
screenplays - the best creative writing course
you can have.' Jude Cook
New chance to win
Visit us here in September when our new,
improved website will be available, including
details of our Writers' & Artists'
Yearbook 2008 blog writing competition. The
winner will receive £500 and become the official
Writers' & Artists' blogger!
Writers'
& Artists' Yearbook 2008 will be
published on 24th July.
Our manuscript assessment
service provides developing writers with
first-class critical feedback and can help
increase chances of publication within the
United Kingdom. http://www.literaryconsultancy.co.uk/
Shortlisted entries are listed here in
alphabetical order:
Juliette Adair Bog
Angel
Erica Adams The Sea with
Diamonds
Letitia Adu-Ampoma Minor to
Major
Heidi Amsinck Cooking for
Arabel
Carol Anderson The Other Shore
Alison Bacon Love Me
Tender
Lynne Taylor and Howard Baker A
Stranger and Afraid
Anne Baness North
Rook
David Bausor
Consideration
James Baynham Making
Good
Halina Boniszewska There's no 'f'
in 'Phonics'
E.L. Bradshaw Dead
Pit
Jean Burnett Flowering
Judas
David Caldo Florentine
Masque
Peter Canning The Ninjabread
Man
Amy Carmichael Genghis
Khan
Martyn Chapman Hormones &
Crumble
Calluym Church The Processing
Plant
Ian Coates Eavesdrop
Tim
Connery Reality TV: The Harry Crowley
Affair
Rachel Connor Small Acts of
Love
Jude Cook Byron Easy
Julie
Corbin Everybody has a Secret
Bernie
Crosthwaite Body Language
Claudia
Cruttwell Poisonous Ejaculations
Paul
Curd An Honorable Man
Malcolm Dancy
Surveillance
Lee David and Francis
Dixon The Fossil of Trionyx
Andrew
Dowding Dudley's Lot
Oliver Eade
Moon Rabbit
S.G. Eldin Hurt
Snowflakes
Jacqueline Escolme The
Perfect Remedy
Penny Feeny Flight
Patterns
Ruth Figgest Poking
Phil
Nathan Filer that seduction of
madness
Steve Freeman Going
Places
Rachel Green An Ungodly
Child
Susanna Harding Between
Stones
Kathy Harvey Dickey The
Executive Sex Clause
June Hendon Past
Imperfect
Clare Hill Cupid's
Therapy
Hazel Howe An Imperfect
Reflection
Susan Humphreys Dr Midas
and the Pirates
Aileen Izett
Eveline
Robin Jarossi
Cheetah
Hazel Jeffers You Can't
Hide a Fish Supper
Andy Jones
Endline
Pia Jones Rain
Master
Ann Kelley Ko Tabu
Dave
Kendrick Unleashed
Kulwant Lall The
other side of midnight
Christopher
Linforth The Last Writer
Elizabeth
Lister Remand Redressed
Eion
Llewelwyn-Jones Laurence
Andreas
Loizou The Stealing
Caroline Lomas
Vanilla Scintilla
Penelope Loveday
The Light Thief
Chris Maddocks
Money Walks
Andrew May The Beauty
of Their Names
Jane McCoy
Bureaucracide
Kate McEwan Learning
to Swim
Jon McGowan Lost and
Found
Teresa McTernan A Case for the
Defence
William Meehan The Finisterre
Mobile Wireless Section
Angela Meredith
Rome Alone
Simon Micthell Pablo's
Egg
Jon Moore Cooper's
Drift
James Morrison The Dwarf on the
Scaffodiling
Tom Nolan Run Ran
Run
Lawrie O'Connor Daughters of
Chana
Jenni O'Connor Desperate
Measures
K.Ogden A Dying
Art
Helen Ogden Of
Scarlet
Lynda Osborne Status: Presumed
Extinct
Jacqueline Paizis Bread &
Philosophy
John Parrington
Interference Zone
Darren Paterson
Depot 573
Diana Peasey
Borderlines
Andrew Phillips
(Untitled)
Robert Pickles Lucky
Country My Arse: Memoirs of a Whinging
Pom
Pam Richards Alchemy of the
Yew
Robert Ronsson The Donovan Twins:
Olympic Mind Games
Sion Scott-Wilson
Somnambulant
Salman Shaheen Casting
Shade on the Sun
Paul Smith
Necropolis
William Stanton
Invisible Writing
Jim Staton The
Man Who Wouldn't Melt
Deborah M. Stead
Scriptorium - 'The Academy'
Jane Stemp
Double Bind
J.E.Strugnell
Shoes
Sarah Tanburn The Melkjeven
Commitment
Eleanor Taylor I Won't Tell
You
Alison Theaker The Greatest
Treason
Jennifer Tuckett I am a
Superhero
Judy Upton Out of the Frying
Pan
Charles Wartnaby
Factor
Rita Wheeler More to Life
Than This
Mary Whitsell
Foreigners
Oscar Windsor-Smith
Tamar
John Worrall A Good Little
Mixer