Dark

  • RATING:           Pg-13
  • CATEGORY:     POV. Hurt/Comfort.
  • PAIRINGS:        None
  • CONTENT WARNINGS: Language. Pain.
  • SPOILERS:       none.
  • AUTHOR'S NOTE:  This is another one that stopped me sleeping… Apologies for the language, but when men get hurt bad, they tend to vocalise that pain. Three dots … alone on a line indicate long pauses.

 

 

Dark.

 

Pain.

 

I hurt. I hurt bad.

 

What happened? I remember being… in a temple. And then the floor collapsed.

 

Ow – ow! Where is he? He was with me when the floor collapsed.

 

Ah, there he is. If I can just move closer to him…shit that hurts…

 

“Can you hear me? Are you okay?”  There’s a faint groan in reply.

 

“I hurt.”

 

“Bad?”

 

S’dark.”

 

“I know.”

 

Whahappnd?”

 

Dunno. Can you move?”

 

There is a long pause. Too long. I can’t see his face, but touching his face I can feel that his eyes are closed. He feels cold under my fingers. Is he dead or just…?  Ah, a pulse. He’s just out cold.

 

How do we get out of this? The others will be looking for us….

 

 

 

…need to stay awake. Ignore the pain. Stay awake. If we’re both unconscious, we won’t know they’re coming. They will come. I know they will.

 

Radios. Where’s my radio? Shit. Smashed. Must have landed on it. What about the other one? Ow. Nope, it’s not here. Can’t feel it anywhere nearby. It really hurts to move.

 

Could try yelling for help. If the others are anywhere nearby, they’ll hear and come and find us.

“Hello! Anyone? Help!”

 

Nothing. No answering shout. Not even an echo. My voice just sounds pathetically quiet, even though I yelled as loud as I could.

 

We’re on our own.

 

 

Stay awake you idiot! Stupid temple! Stupid rain! Stupid, stupid mess!

 

Dammit Daniel! You’ve been working with the military long enough, you know better than to go play in the temple when you’re told not to. Didn’t assess the risks. And now we’ve got a right mess here.

 

Right, now we use soldier training to get us out of here.

 

Assess the situation.

 

It’s dark. That means I’m either blind or we’re a long way from any light source. Ah, I can just see my hand in front of my face, so I’m not blind. It’s just very dark.

 

Injuries – well he’s out cold, so he’s probably taken a bash to the head. Me? I can’t move my right arm without extreme pain, and it’s hard to move my legs without pain in my pelvis… in my… shit, have I lost my… dick? It won’t matter if I have – it’s not like anyone needs me to keep it in working order. I can’t remember the last time I had sex…

 

Get a grip man! Worrying about the loss of a non-existent sex life is the last thing you should be doing – you need to get out of here, or else you will both die. Come on; pull yourself together, concentrate on the matter in hand.

 

 

Tired. Cold… No. Concentrate. We need to get out.

 

How do we get out of here?

 

I can see a faint glimmer of light way up there. That suggests that there might be a way out up there.

 

So how do I get there? No – how do we get there? I’m not leaving him behind. He’s my best friend and if I leave him behind to get what might be non-existent help he might never get out of here alive, wherever here might be. Whatever needs to be done, we do it together. No-one gets left behind. That’s the rule.

 

I wish he were awake. I know all we’d do is snipe at each other, and have one of those Jack and Daniel bickering sessions that makes everyone else just roll their eyes. They all think we don’t see it, but we know that they do it. Then he’d tell me he was fine, and try and hide the fact that he wasn’t, and I’d do the same, and then we’d both try and take responsibility for this situation, even though we both know whose fault it is really… at least there wouldn’t be this awful silence…

 

 

Right, I’ve got get both of us up there somehow, using only one arm. There’s a challenge. At least the ground seems to be sloping upwards. It feels like mud. Ah. It was raining – perhaps there was a flash flood that washed away the temple. Okay, so where are we likely to be?

 

Underground – in a room below the rest of the building perhaps? Who knows?

 

Right, let’s get us out of here before any more mud sweeps through here and buries us alive. How can I drag him with me when I’ve only got one good arm?

 

 

Think, dammit, think!

 

Belts! If I fix our belts together, I can strap him on my back, and pull us up the slope. We’ll probably lose our pants, but who cares…

 

Oh shit shit shit! That really hurts! Why would taking my belt off hurt my hips like that? What have I done to myself?

 

Don’t think about that, just get on with the job in hand. Right, that’s my belt undone, let’s get his.

 

Damn, his legs are buried in the mud. I’ll have to dig him out first.

 

 

Tired. So tired. And cold. Can’t feel my fingers or toes. Still, he’s not half buried in mud any more.

 

Right, two belts fastened together. How can I strap him to me? I know, one of those baby slings like the Eskimos have, across one shoulder, holding him onto my back. Nope, he’s going to slip off like that. But if I tie his hands to the belt-loops on my pants…

 

This looks awful. His wrists are strapped together like he’s my prisoner, but if I put his arms over my shoulders, and then strap the belts to my pants, then he won’t slip down and throttle me.

 

 

Right. That’ll have to do. How long has this taken? Way too long.

 

Okay, here goes. Let’s head for home… find a rhythm, one, two, pull. Ignore the pain. One, two, pull. One, two, pull. He’s heavy… too heavy. One…two…pull… he’s counting on you. You can do this… one…two…

 

 

 

How long was I out for? Damn. Come on, find the rhythm. One, two… pull.

 

 

One… two… pull…

 

 

Is that daylight? Need to shout. I can hear voices… it’s Teal’c!

 

help…help…we’re here…”

 

So tired… hurts so bad….

 

*

 

Major General George Hammond entered the infirmary, where SG-1 were currently being cared for. Major Carter and Teal’c sat to one side, staring at two curtained-off beds. They looked exhausted, and they were filthy – covered in mud. In fact, they looked positively bedraggled.

 

An hour ago, four hours after Major Carter’s request for search and rescue assistance, SG-1 had finally returned from what should have been a routine mission, battered, tired and dirty. Doctor Jackson and Colonel O’Neill had been whisked off to the infirmary, unconscious. Now Hammond wanted an explanation as to how his premier team could come home in such a state from a supposedly uninhabited planet.

 

“Major,” he frowned in concern at their appearance. “What happened out there?”

 

“Sir,” Sam rubbed her hand through her hair. It was so caked in mud it was dark brown in colour, instead of the usual blonde. She looked a little bewildered and close to tears. “We were on P3T-698, and Daniel… found a temple. He thought it was dedicated to Ra. He wanted to investigate it. The Colonel went with him. We were taking soil samples… It started raining – torrential rain.” She took a deep breath before continuing. “There was a sudden flash flood. The river burst its banks… the temple was downstream… they didn’t stand a chance.”

 

“What about you two – are you okay?”  Hammond looked from Sam to Teal’c and back again.

 

“We are well, General Hammond. I managed to catch hold of a tree and save both Major Carter and myself from being swept away by the torrent. It is O’Neill and Daniel Jackson who are hurt.” Teal’c stared straight ahead, at the curtains in front of him.

 

“How did you find Doctor Jackson and Colonel O’Neill?”

 

“It took a long time. There was a landslide – tons of mud swept through the temple. We didn’t think we’d find them alive…” Sam choked back a sob.

 

“We were digging in the mud for hours, General Hammond.” Teal’c’s jaw twitched. “They must have been swept into a chamber beneath the temple.”

 

“So… how did you find them?”

 

“They were near the entrance to the room. They must have climbed up to the entrance. They were so badly hurt…I don’t know how he did it… he dragged him up the slope… he was so hurt…” Sam shook her head, tears welling in her eyes. She scrubbed angrily at her eyes and then stared down at her hands.

 

“If they had not been at the top of the mudslide, we never would have found them – the entrance was so small, and the room appeared to be completely filled with mud. We had already looked there and did not believe it possible that anyone could be in there and still live.” Teal’c raised his chin slightly.

 

Suddenly the curtains round one of the beds were flung open, and the occupant of the bed was wheeled off on a trolley at great speed. Janet opened the curtains round the other bed. Sam and Teal’c stood.

 

“Where have you taken him?” asked Sam.

 

“Surgery – he’s got a badly fractured pelvis that needs pinning and plating. That, several cracked ribs and a dislocated shoulder. None of which was helped by lugging a dead weight up a steep slope.” Janet pursed her lips. “And as for that dead weight – nasty concussion, cracked ribs, broken femur, tibia and fibula. Fortunately, he doesn’t need surgery. They’ve both got nasty cuts and abrasions, which need major cleaning due to all that mud, and are suffering the effects of prolonged exposure to cold. It’s a wonder they’re not worse than they are… ” She scrubbed her hand across her face. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got to scrub up and assist Dr Warner in the OR.” She nodded at Hammond and disappeared out of the infirmary.

 

Sam, Teal’c and Hammond gathered at the bedside.

 

The man in the bed looked seriously battered. He was wrapped in a silver blanket, a warm saline drip in his arm. Monitors beeped and flashed details of his condition. As the three of them stood scrutinising the bruises on the pale face, he opened his eyes slightly. He winced and screwed his eyes up against the brightness of the infirmary lights.

 

S’not dark,” he muttered, closing his eyes tightly.

 

“No…” murmured Sam.

 

“Not… there any more?” Eyes still closed. Lids slightly more relaxed.

 

“No. You’re home now.”

 

“Home…”

 

“Yes Sir, you’re home. Daniel carried you out…” But Sam’s words fell on deaf ears. Jack was already asleep.

 

 

*Fin*

 

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